Lord Anzius

Nice. DEMON STORY YAY!!! :D I hoped for someone to write one of these. Spooky. Well written... I can''t actually say anything because everything has been already said. :cry: Great ...

Good work with the poem. What war??? is it just random Well done in many, many ways. * LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE :smt029

He really did something like that... WoW.. Nice work. Well thought out. *********************************************************************************** LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE :smt029

WoW...... THAT was SOOOo True. You need some periods and question marks. Not only comas. Good structure. Well done in many wayz. LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE :smt029

It is, good. Short. Lovely and deep. Shows enough feeling.................................................................................................................... Great :D well done *******

Good but not perfect. The amount of Vampire stories on this site are getting high. I don't really like them myself (Sry to all the vamp lovers here), But this ...

Harsh.... Realistic though. Are you angry at someone???? try and remember the comas and periods. didn't rime all the time but was good anywayz. good work :D LORD ANZIUS WUZ ...

So in the very end was it a poem about friendship? Very dramatic, well done lad. :) hope to read more of your works 'cos this is the first time ...

Nice. I can't really say anything, because most of what can be said has been said. As said above you have a hook, a good hook if I may say, ...

Fantastista työtä :D Taidan puhuu ny kuitenki enkkuu et muutki pystyy ymärtää. :) .................................................................................................................

I'm tottally with you in this. That is very true. Good idea for a start. Good is the only thing I say any more, I somehow only read the stories ...

WOW. All that because of a math lesson......................................................................................... WOW. Good, I didn't find any flaws- :D .................................

He can't speak.....? Where are his siblings? Are they his real siblings? Does he know of them? The darkness fell heavily over the streets that become more and more lonely ...

Great editing. Love the work (as always) I don't know this just might only be me, but whose son was it again who was put in the human home? I'm ...

If they are sister and brother.. who is Nayn? is he/she his brother/sister as well? great as ussual. Hands were holding him down to the ground as he was struggling ...